So everyone she meets just falls at her feet within one chapter?
Development could be so much better if they took the time to allowed some characters to announce their loyalty, or if they just showed loyalty through action. Like if this marquis' daughter had spent some more time acting tsundere and showing her loyalty instead of just saying, verbally, out loud, I WILL SUPPORT YOU SIS WHOO. Or if the knight from the previous chapter did some internal thinking and decided to stay by her side, without spelling it out, to keep an eye on her (also what kind of imperial knight just pledges loyalty to someone who isn't even a part of the royal family yet?) so you'd see glimpses of him in the shadows/corners of the room watching over her.
Art is pretty, but also something I could only read in the daytime/well lit room. If I read this in a dim room at night my glasses prescription is going to drop by a full point lmao.