Writing isn't exactly hard work, and after a trip you mostly need physical rest, not mental.
A subtle dismissal becomes far less subtle if you point it out in the narration.
She looks a little out of place with so short skirt compared to the other maids.
Yeah, his tact is a little bit lacking. And so is his understanding of how to lure a cat.
Sometimes, you have to be a little more specific when allowing someone to grab what they like.
That's the most "don't hate it" face I've seen in a long time.
They're very slow to realise that she is, indeed, a vanguard.
That's a good smile on page 19.
How does sightseeing
not qualify as an errand?
They didn't have to go so hard on painting her as a scheming bastard... I just hope it's not malicious.
Man...this dude would get fleeced the second he sets foot in a full on tourist trap city.
Yeah, he's not exactly what you would call street-savvy.
Looking forward to Mel not joining the party, but she is sticking around (summon item: BBQ), be a vanguard/scout, joining the meals, and helping with their adventuring in general. (Which at that point she is a member in all but name)
Yeah, that's how I see it too. An informal member who may or may not sit out on occasion.