Alternative title: 500 maidens worth of Stockholm Syndrome.
I get what the author is going for:
- The "good" humans aren't as good as they think they are.
- The "bad" demon aren't as bad as the humans think.
- Basically the same two points above, but from a demon, as opposed to a human, perspective.
There are a few problems with this:
- The girls' supposed "freedom" among the demons is only in the form of slightly less oppression. *
- The "freedom" was achieved at the cost of being kidnapped and forced to marry.
- The one who ordered the kidnapping is shown to not really care for it at all. *
- Most of the demons they're forced to marry show disdain, or even hatred, for humans. *
- The heroines are shown to fall in love with the ones chosen as husbands for them whilst all of these issues are ongoing.
Sure, I expect the issues marked with an asterisk to be resolved eventually, and both demons and humans are shown to be prejudiced against one another; but the last point is the clinching issue for me: I just can't accept some kind of faux-Romeo-and-Juliet lovestory whilst none of the other issues are resolved. It just feels like a massive Stockholm-Syndrome party, and is, IMHO, quite abhorrent.
If I were to give prescriptive advice to the author I'd tell him to take it easy with the romantical elements in the beginning (very important), and to show the demon side as well, so as to more clearly show that the prejudice goes both ways (slightly less important, as he already has the heroines overhear/notice things that show the demons reconsidering their prejudice against humans), and to then reduce and resolve the prejudice from both ends simultaneously (very important, although he probably already plans to do this).