Kurasu no Gyaru ni Kuuki Atsukai Sareteimasu - Ch. 17

[Xical]

All looks good, about the sfx that's really a choice for the translation team to make.
About the text in the first box of first page, that's the nightmare of the typesetter, text in the original fits perfectly and is consistent with all other bubbles, but trying to fit it in translation, ughhhhhhhh...

Maybe an edit/redraw of the box, cutting it vertically and extending horizontally just enough to fit a:
"Going
Home"
with the same letter size as in the other bubbles can work, but the extra effort redrawing the cloud in the back and hopping it fit aesthetically may be worth or not.

 

[Ari2142]

THE FIRST BOX TEXTS IS TOO DAMN SMALL.

Are you guys an ants?

 

[Senros]

The sfx does bring it up to the next level, so I say, "If it doesn't take an obscene amount of effort to redraw, go for it."
If they take too long, you don't have to do all of them (maybe go with the easier ones and just translate the more difficult ones at the side/bottom/somewhere near the sfx).

 

[HeatManga]

The text in the text box at the very beginning is far too small.

Better like this?

 

[HeatManga]

THE FIRST BOX TEXTS IS TOO DAMN SMALL.

Are you guys an ants?

It should be better now.

 

[Gurame]

Looks fine to me

 

[UncleBenny]

Oh no he's gonna be raped oh no

 

[Mikedapro]

SFX looks amazing, keep it up!

 

[kn4ll]

Oh no he's gonna be raped oh no

Ugh, you’re reminding me of the first chapter comments here where people were unironically complaining about him being raped.

 

[niteman555]

I didn't notice the sfx until you pointed it out, but I think you did it well

 

[HeatManga]

I didn't notice the sfx until you pointed it out, but I think you did it well

Off-topic, but that dog looks so adorable!

 

[phil777]

Oh no now she even invade his home

She's probably gonna go sit on his bed too.

 

[meer1]

yeh it aight, but if it's a pain in the ass to do the sfx, just don't do it haha

 

[MiguelH224]

Please go home Akutsu-san but aggressive.

Please go home Akutsu-san but actual progress

 

[rayce]

If his parents aren't home.. hooboy he gonna get snacked on all day.

 

[Lynkaster]

fonts look good, for the sfx... do if you don't think it's a chore, redrawing is the most thankless work in scanlation, you do hours to make it seems natural enough people won't stop on these pixel for more than a micro second.

 

[olivetho]

Please go home Akutsu-san but aggressive.

akutsu but she's perveted and got too influenced by misaki

 

[aa11bb]

Breaking and entering lol

 

[pdaangsakti21]

Font is nice. For sfx I'm oeaning towards the original sfx with these weak reasons:

• No need to redraw all those onomatopoeia, I'm sure most of us can roughly understand them
• Some translation on sfx are kinda cringy. Imagine gogogogogo sfx being translated lol
• For all ideas and purposes, original sfx is how the artists and authors convey things. Should we translate it here will be things lost in translation. Be it simple nuances or bigger things like cultural differences

 

[banjomarx]

"wow look at this abandoned house that nobody lives in, guess I should hang out here all the time"