Lamia Orphe Is Dead - Ch. 26 - A Present

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What?! still with the knight plan. Duh, Lamia really ignoring her brother potential. Her brother can't be and don't wanna be the next duke. He loves (and great at) sword. But she really going to throw everything out of the window (with possibility ml cured his brother).
Girl you said you want the best for your bro. But no. You just want to shelter him. No sheltered kid gonna be strong. She pretend nothing happen. Even after whay her father said. Even after he made such oath. And she supposed to be "smart". Are you kidding me? *FacePalm*
 
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My complaint here is that the author gives too little info on the past and present this leaving readers with no way to make sense because you have to make so many assumptions. Usually with a series like this there's be some info that would do a 180 in the plot or world building. an ex. Of one that does this well is raeliana sure there is a bit of a mystery but the author keeps it so that we still know a lot about the current situation ol n and its ever changing status. Everything is talked about as though the readers are aware of this world's customs which are only talked about in passing and no meaning to us since it wasn't explained. Tldr: author needs to give more info that isn't just assumptions wrong have to make as a reader
 
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...What the hell did that damned bastard give me?" A flower made of...magic? I mean, what did you expect? Of course a magic flower isn't gonna be destroyed so easily.
 
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is it bad that I smiled when she crushed the flower the first time round? shame it didn't stay that way.
 
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@wkread exactly! like even if he's good now, you can't disregard all he's done, and if Lamia trusted the ML I'd think she was an idiot, and it would be horrible to disregard what happened to her brother.
 

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