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I liked it. BUT:
The way they described his 'talent less' is quite shitty. "A godly soul that has nowhere else to grow"? Dafuq? You think that is a garbage? Please, come with a better excuse for MC underdog.
His fated encounter with girl#1 in the woods is also quite forced, you don't become a 'Master' if you make rookie mistakes, like using a move before having the body to make it so.
Still, as said before, I liked it. it is not the best, I shall see it as "room to improve".
The way they described his 'talent less' is quite shitty. "A godly soul that has nowhere else to grow"? Dafuq? You think that is a garbage? Please, come with a better excuse for MC underdog.
His fated encounter with girl#1 in the woods is also quite forced, you don't become a 'Master' if you make rookie mistakes, like using a move before having the body to make it so.
Still, as said before, I liked it. it is not the best, I shall see it as "room to improve".