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To me it seemed like that ending was planned, but the author wanted the murder-suicide scene to be a gut punch to the readers. So the previous chapter was structured in this abrupt way for maximum impact. The problem is that a lot of bullshit strings had to be pulled in order to make that work, and it resulted in weaker story overall.Same. This is fine for a final chapter but what the hell was the final part of the previous one. If you wanted a tragedy with Moyupu commiting murder followed by suicide, that's one thing. What happened was just... that.
Still don't regret reading and enjoyed this rollercoaster.
Tbh I still liked it, but yeah it could have been better.