Sen no Sukiru o Motsu Otoko - Vol. 4 Ch. 23

[MangaDex]

 

[CommieJohnTeh]

A Tournament Arc with a side-dish of Murder Mystery. Someone's been brainstorming 🤔

 

[Camin]

Holger has the default villain face

 

[Lopfertop9090]

Wtf... They have the face of being criminal they look like they will butt rape you

 

[Hollow7F]

...does the always by your side+ hug count as him accepting her confession?

 

[Dezaki]

ya know, i was kinda expecting this him to be summoned by multiple people and into multiple worlds. now its just a regular generic isekai. maybe its wrong for me to expect too much from the trash category called isekai itself

 

[womangadex]

Yay they hugged and kissed and had seggs

 

[icarushector]

...Clearly they could have gotten away with using magic if they can just walk up to a guy after the match has been called and FUCKING STAB THEM.

 

[imfromkissmangabutitsgone]

dafuq how was he disqualified if that so break all of his bones just to be fair

 

[spekhz]

why are they so ugly

 

[Moraza]

Man the of the fight was executed poorly......

And really was unnecessary, since they already well established that Orc-chan is a petty and unlikeable shit. The looks of the fighters was enough to sell that they were big shits as well.

Unless the point of the scene was to explicitly establish that those shits are able to do shit like that in front of a large crowd with no repercussion, it didn't need to take place and was a waste of writing and drawing. However if that was what they were going for.... they still missed the mark because that type of scene should have a corrupt referee to say something along the lines of "I didn't see anything wrong, but if you heroes don't shut up I'll get YOU disqualified."


If I was the editor on this I would have asked for the last two panels of https://mangadex.org/chapter/1098099/22 to be changed:

Replace the head bonk with Shit#3 doing a sweep to trip Hans, and have Hans mid fall.
Then you replace the final Panel with a reaction shot of our heroes looking dejected and saying "Its over....."

Just replacing those two panels would have greatly improved the flow without having to redo everything to explictly show a corrupt referee..... having Shit#3 attack Hans after someone shouted "Its over" , and then not showing any sort of reprimand OR refusal to reprimand them is pretty bad story telling.

 

[Moraza]

@spekhz
@Lopfertop9090

Its to give the readers even more reason to not like them and/or know that there is nothing readable about these 1-dimensional Thugs, would be my guess.

 

[Eraviel]

I THOUGHT THEY WERE GOING TO KISS

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

 

[stretch22]

So long and thanks for all the fish
Dropped.
It's not that it's slow
It's not that they're both dense
It's not that there's a third wheel
It's not that he's a simp
It's not that she's a wimp
It's not that they can bring bring technology and goods across world's

It's all of the above put together. Everything put together makes for a very boring manga

 

[EluRepulser]

man tbh i think the world building here sucks really sucks.

 

[Sakisai]

the accurate name for a "treasure dredger" is actually tosher, so you'd call what he is a tosher.

 

[Siikalahna]

@stretch22 Gotta agree with pretty much everything you've got listed there. Though won't drop it. Not yet at least.

 

[-Aincrad-]

Lol my is everyone from the enemy team is the most disgusting looking human on earth?

 

[stilgar]

Ok, but why?

 

[ShionSinX]

I still think he should be asking her to unsummon and resummon him as much as possible (whatever time takes for her to replenish enough mana) to get more skills.