Shinju no Nectar - Vol. 16 Ch. 76 - Doronea in Danger

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You know the women she just slime raped was a princess there as a political ally, so if they were smart rather than let her say anything immediately bring up she was last seen in her mansion hasn't been heard from since and accuse the uninitelligent horndog and her family of treason and execute them and their allies on the spot...
 
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LMAO, Doronea managed to remember that she's not actually in a doujin for a bit. Helpful mention that the slime gives its prey air; clear foreshadowing for Doronea breaking free somehow. Maybe Gil comes in clutch?
 
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Helpful mention that the slime gives its prey air; clear foreshadowing for Doronea breaking free somehow
She said it takes days for the slime to kill its prey, more than enough to free the girl or even just finish the arc and force her to say where she is.
 
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I think that it's worth commenting, but for a women who thinks of herself as oh so smart. The fact that she doesn't think for a second that just disappearing a dwarf princess isn't going to start a giant shit storm of a diplomatic mess is quite shortsighted
Isnt it? She seems to really believe that her caretaker wouldn't keep tabs on her... the crown princess... of an allied nation... that has an equal to a superior level of technology... and is engaged to an officer of the country.

She doesn't believe elves are superior... she believes SHE is superior, or better yet she has the biggest inferiority complex in the world, she needs others to be inferior to her, or her pretty little world will crumble apart.

I won't say this arc is perfect, but I certainly will laugh when things blow in her face.
 
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Like other said, why does the author need to go for these shitty rape situation? This could even have been used for Dorotea to grow as a character but no...
"why don't i 8let myself get raped because this bitch told me that she would not fuck the dude i love, and i'm sure a dude that took down an entire frigging country realy need me to get raped to not lose a trial..."
Yeah... Such a great character. It's great that she is a princess, it's great that she was educated to be smart and strong. We dont have to see her in realy poorly writen situation only because author never could sex with a woman in his entire life.
 
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God I hate how much of a cuck this author is. It's like he wants all the characters to get fucked by anyone other than the mc of the manga he wrote. The villains get all the kinkiest sexually charged situations with the girls, but he has the mc shriek in terror at the sight of a tit and get little to no action.

Like dude, if you wanted to write an ntr manga from the beginning, write one. Don't write some regular ecchi and then constantly edge it as close as possible to ntr only to back out so you can go "See! I didn't do it! I only just ALMOST did it! It's not ntr!"
And even then since he knew people wouldn't like her getting pounded by orcs, he STILL had to have her raped by a slime because it's "not as bad" as an orc. So dumb, lmao.
 
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Does she really think she can get away with killing a dwarf princess. She really showed how stupid she is.
 
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Wow, a rather convenient slime trap you got there
Surely it wasn't made up by the author that exact moment so his antagonist cunt could still win despite Doronea being too badass.
I don't see how that's it tbh, she was already put out of commission by the maid, it's not like this is some super powerful deus ex machina for the villain to win or something. All the slime did was pick up someone who was already drugged, the slime's there because the author wanted to draw tentacle stuff, not because he needed a way to defeat Doronea.
 
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I really want to fast forward to the part where this worthless elf is on the receiving end of some wild animal's genitals in her own dungeon with zero chance of escape and survival. Crazy women are always such awful villains, and this one is just so bland and one-dimensional.
 
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I don't get it even if ppl gonna see he is an impostor does it rly delete all that he achieved for them?
People are fickle, stupid and easily swayed; we don't know how much the public knows about Grey as a person, only as a hero. Smear his image enough and people will throw shits, hero or not.

Worse, if the people know the truth, public outrage and distrusts of the government will spike. The anti royal factions will no doubt ferment this to erode the royal family's power.
 
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I'm still wondering why they didn't just sneak one of the girls into his room and have him murder the elf bitch.
"Oh no, he committed a crime! Arrest him now!!"
Proceeds to murder everyone who stands against him
This would 100% be a better development as it would lead to him becoming an actual commander that imposes fear.
 
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I am glad the author remembered she was super strong and was fighting Gil with her dad, and had her easily beat the orcs
 
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I have to say this chapter was poorly written ... but dammit it was well drawn. Sure, using a poor excuse to get Dorothea nekkid was bad but let's look at the up side ... she was nekkid again, LOL. That and her remembering she was a badass were the only saving graces for this chapter.
 
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I just binged through the series and boy is it a good read, thanks for translating it for so long. I’m hoping Doronea is gonna be okay
 
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I have to wonder what the author's intentions are in making Doronea appear so foolish. It has to be intentional, otherwise...
On a side note, it's a good representation of a certain side of the political spectrum.
It is hyperreality, so to speak.

The "explanation" is that even if Doronea is well educated, intelligent, and capable... she is inexperienced in the ways of the world, and because she is a girl in love she was tunnel visioning her priorities.

Dumb, I don't argue with that, but the writing style of this author does make use of this hyperreality, where certain traits are dialed to 11 at certain moments to justify certain actions.

Personally, it doesn't bother me too much... in this series, Hiroyuki-sensei is a good script writer, not perfect, but he knows what he is doing and what he wants to convey, and even with all the very well done worldbuilding... we all know what is his priority with the girls.

And truth be told, even in real life people practically stupidify themselves when they aren't looking at all the facts and let emotions run too high.
 
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I don't get it even if ppl gonna see he is an impostor does it rly delete all that he achieved for them?
Rather than deleting, it would put the legitimacy into question. The reveal would show that there has been conspiracy going on, and the credence of the queen would be in the gutters if the reveal were to ever be confirmed.

Not to mention that his act last arc, to bring the two tribes together, involved bringing the Kingdom's name into the equation as a common enemy without the consent of the rulers, which is nothing short of a diplomatic disaster.
 

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