Suterare Elf-san wa Sekai de Ichiban Tsuyokute Kawaii! - Ch. 1.1

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...There has got to be a previous chapter, chapter 1.0 or chapter 0. There's too much missing and assumed for this to be the first chapter.

Or... It's incredibly shittily done.
 
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No seriously though why have we gone from longer debut chapters to "let's make the pacing worse by cutting the chapter into parts we release"? In general if I'm lost on the first chapter released without the goddamn synopsis then there's a problem. There shouldn't be required reading this early on. An exposition opening is better than this. Show don't tell is only a better method if you show something. And those random internal monologue asides feel less natural than an actual narrator explaining everything.

cause this is released in magazine format. So a bunch of different stories shoved together and handed to an reading audience much like how a shotgun sprays buckshot into a flock of ducks. At least few lethal hits will be certain.
 
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Elf the best race to always be racist against.
As a dwarf from Karaz-a-Karak I still hold some grudges against them and they will never be forgotten and stay in our great book till the day they are avenged^^
 
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...There has got to be a previous chapter, chapter 1.0 or chapter 0. There's too much missing and assumed for this to be the first chapter.

Or... It's incredibly shittily done.

There is a chapter zero. But its been posted on the scanlators reader only

The set up is actually a bit different. MC used to be a va/singer and then was tricked into a scandal and abanoned by agency. She turned full neet after being disgusted with the world and became the top players of that game/world she is in now.

She doesn't actually "die" in the real world. She got a pop up w/ the goddess asking her to "save" the world. She gets one shot and if she dies she goes back to the real world but if she clears the game she can either stay in the world or go back to real world and get 1 wish so her wish would be to erase the scandal so she can go back to being a va/singer... and she selects yes... and then we get treated to a teaser with the "goddess" being sus
 
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She went straight from the womb to the cliff, and apparently she was born with clothes on. Ughhh

So I'm supposed to believe this 5-minute old baby is gonna survive this world... She's basically a big fetus at this point. Ughhh Ughhh

Sefiria (another baby isekai) was kinda hard to swallow, but at least she was a few months old when the story started.
 
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Note that they have the chapter 0 translated since the 22nd in their website, they need to upload it here now lol
 
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I don't understand, how was that escapism?
IKR, mother literally gets her baby stolen from her and essentially murdered.

The whole time screaming and crying to give her back her baby...

But it's from "Guilt" despite her never doing anything wrong, and "Escapism" which is really her just holding onto false hope and getting a bit of closure (although ends up not being false hope).

but the hate directed towards the mom is just retarded, New MC please, this one has no brain cells. XD
 

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