@xiaotiao
So, I do appreciate your wanting to contribute and bring more translated works to the world. But --
- The original group translating this manga released their last chapter just over a month ago and is actively working on the next one. Making your efforts a blatant and egregious snipe, which is -- while not against the rules -- incredibly rude.
- Google Translate is not a satisfactory replacement for a proper translator. It is notorious for inaccurate and stilted translations. As such:
- The grammar is, I'm sorry to say, atrocious. The kindest thing I could say about it is "I could kinda guess what it's supposed to say".
- The typesetting is... a lot. I understand that you used Paint, and I'm very sorry about that. However! there are plenty of guides on this very site that teach the basics of typesetting, including what software to use and how to do things.
- You initially released a chapter far out of sequence, which ???
When all these things come together, it makes for a very shoddy translation that leaves the reader guessing more often than not. All nuance and tone from the original work is lost. This is what I mean when I say it's disrespectful to the original author; when you translate, you're taking on the responsibility of representing the author and their work to an entirely new audience, and the choices you make can be incredibly influential regarding how the work is perceived. This perception can, in some cases, make the difference between a manga being officially brought over to the West or not. And I'm tired of seeing wonderful manga killed or made forgotten by sloppy translations.
You're asking what you can do, which is wonderful! I suggest you:
- Look through some guides to learn how to do the basics of typesetting. (https://mangadex.org/title/43627/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide)
- Look around and apply to some scanlation groups. You obviously have passion, and that's a good thing! Work with others and cultivate that passion into something wonderful.
- Keep loving yuri, and keep wanting to do the best for yuri.