Yeesh, what a preachy, cancerous, one-sided, self-righteous rant of a credits page. Only saw the drama because of wanting to comment how shit their translations are alongside the garbage, unfunny memeing -- if you can even call the tripe they pull a meme.
I had a huge comment typed out, but "Some white people can be defensive over white priv" is absolutely true. Unfortunately, for most of this paper, the SOME is my addition. (Though I find this often comes from a misunderstanding of what priv is -- these days I basically compare it to how fucked you are when a cop pulls you over based PURELY on skin color) That said, this paper is hilariously fucked in how much it states blanket observations of a race as a fact. Talk about ass-backwards. I don't even disagree with the general idea, but I do despise how they wrote it. If you looked up "counterproductive" in a dictionary, it would have the same essay clip.
If you wanted to make that point, there are many better papers to choose from that this rancid heap of garbage. Also, in reference to your next credit page, this isn't "action," its grandstanding. You aren't taking any sort of action of note.
Also, new girl sucks.