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Hikari didn't see enough inititally to think anything either. Yami, thought he was a crybaby and tried to fuck the innocence out of him. Then actualy fell in love with him when he got whiskey dick and couldn't get it up because of how sad she looked because he's not an asshole and actually...

Well with how many mistresses her step-dad had, her mom got NTR'd pretty bad.

I Feel like they went into this like the writers and film makers went into the last star wars trilogy. Directionless and out of touch. I really wish Maruto would have written the light novel for at least a half a year before they made it into a manga. That way there would have been better...

Sucks for yami, that's a shitty situation. Too bad I don't really have any kind of emotional attachment to any of the characters anymore.

Romcoms have the ability to be flexible (complex or simple), dramas can't be as flexible. The exposition started 8 months after the start of release. Yes the pacing was good for what it was before. You are bringing comments from chapter 13 when there were really no good hints of what it was...

Not for a romcom. For a drama with serious elements? Yes. You need more exposition if your going to touch serious subjects. That could have been what the author was going for too, tried to experiment and subvert expectations. The thing with subverting expectations though is that it is really...

Review bombing is an overused terms. People don't like the series or the direction it took and rated it appropriately to them. Just because someone may like the series and doesn't like the fact that someone else can express their opinion is juvenile. By the way the series is a poorly paced...

Correct, and the way yuu was acting, him and yami were already broken up at that point.

I'm a detractor of this story because of the poor initial release and storytelling but this is in no way ntr. It's just a typical drama.

I think the Yami fans are going to be disappointed on where this is going. They obviously broke up for a reason, going to separate schools is not a means for a breakup. Yami is also showing signs of being very possessive and needy, not saying it's a bad thing but it will most likely strain their...

That's probably better written than what we're going to get.

If not for the awful buildup, this story could have had more potential. Just doesn't hit very right because it was so poorly told.

How are they supposed to add the details to the managa when they simulpub it? It's impossible and why i think this work suffers for it. The story might be good but the way it's presented and published makes it bad.

Yom just draws it, Maruto writes it. There was even one point where Yom was surprised the direction the story took.

Just go to the authors note page and use the auto translator for the website. I'll link it below, I know the built in translator for chrome for me works really well. https://note.com/saranami/

I'm more disappointed than mad. It's an awful written mess for a generic drama. It was fairly well written at first for a generic romcom. Romcom's don't need the depth of writing a drama has, so the sudden turn to drama doesn't sit right with a lot of the original audience. And if you were...

Drama tag was added way later.

I still stand by the story is not bad and has potential. I also stand by that the way this comic/LN was released is why this is such a mess. Should have written out the light novel first and then had yom draw longer more robust chapters. Drip feeding 4-7 pages chapters every 2 weeks is not...

This release schedule and the amount of pages per chapter is bad and now he does a fantasy .5? This is why editors and publishers are important.

I'm here for this train wreck, I don't think I can look away from the crash anymore. 😂