eeh, i gave a few chapters a try but what a really bad story..
"ooh the mc is wronged. now he can redo, so he went ballistic with sadism to those who wronged him in the future. but wait its ok because the bad guys turned out to be reaaly worse.." meh what a lousy story writing..
its doesn't even makes the mc likeable or hate-able with all the drama. "oh yeah, he's cruel, but deep down he's kinda good, but only to help him do more evil..." no, that design of character indecisiveness is worse then the densest harem chara like IS ichika. what you're gonna keep readers entertained then? slight notion of cruelty that not even properly made? even worse, when it try to portray cruelty (like chap 11), it loses all the tension with all those character faces.
nope -4/10
"ooh the mc is wronged. now he can redo, so he went ballistic with sadism to those who wronged him in the future. but wait its ok because the bad guys turned out to be reaaly worse.." meh what a lousy story writing..
its doesn't even makes the mc likeable or hate-able with all the drama. "oh yeah, he's cruel, but deep down he's kinda good, but only to help him do more evil..." no, that design of character indecisiveness is worse then the densest harem chara like IS ichika. what you're gonna keep readers entertained then? slight notion of cruelty that not even properly made? even worse, when it try to portray cruelty (like chap 11), it loses all the tension with all those character faces.
nope -4/10