It's nice, dude has weird PTSD, but it's fine, really interested in how the two female mc's dynamic plays out. There is hate from people for an underwhelming male mc, but knowing it's going to be more centered on drama, it's obvious that things won't be fast paced from the get go, it will take time to develop, so I won't judge it just yet. Though since it's more of a romance drama, I feel it should have more panels per chapter.
I don't see any obvious flaws, just preferentially opinionated.
Preface is interesting, generic prelude. Story line is bit inconsistent but not too bad.
Give it a try, it's a hit or miss.