some stuff i've picked over reading the first 9 chapters and raised my concerns on the story:
• using tech being, you know, half-beast/beasts/magical creatures (where's the magic in your fantasy stories, you hack?).
• the whole ordeal from the human's pov is rather shallow.
• demi-human's/beasts/magical creatures behave strictly like your average human.
• the comedic tid bits are bad.
• generally speaking, characters have little to no depth.
• mc being your idealistic idiot (sasuga japan).
• DEM everywhere.
overall, (so far) seems like the author only knows how to write one kind of series and, in this particular one, that pattern, fails spectacularly. The MGR similarity doesn't help.