@OuterRem
Thank you for your thanks (I really appreciate it). From what I can tell, the Koreans actually don't mind it. A difference in culture: the Korean language promotes ambiguity in a way that English doesn't. It simply feels more natural to have these sorts of sentences in Korean rather than English. Like you said, English is too linear.
The Koreans who read this series are, obviously, massive weebs just like me. As long as it has cute Korean anime girls doing cute anime girl things, we're happy. Plus Korean culture is always a nice touch.
The people who vocally don't like these books accuse the fans of this series of being pedophiles.
These detractors are salty because this series is THE Korean light novel series. This series is single-handedly keeping the publishing company, Seed Novel, in business. Basically, this series has a cult following of Korean anime fans.