You can see from the art that this is very amateurish.The pacing is so strange.
It's like a dream where it doesn't make sense once you wake.
what? wasnt she talk about her being the daugther of the rapist in 2nd ch to kazuma?Previous chapters make it seem as if the mother doesn't actually know who Shiika is
What would be a not-cheap emotional appeal, given her circumstances?Oh of course bullying. Just checking another thing off the list for cheap emotional appeals. Good. Great stuff.
Tbf he probably would accept itWhy do I feel like she wants to be the one to end him. Sussy lil sis
I believe the word "that" in his mother's line "I didn't tell her about that." refers to the fact that he went to jail, so effectively she only talked to Shiika about the what (mother and son not living together), not the why (his sentence).what? wasnt she talk about her being the daugther of the rapist in 2nd ch to kazuma?
There's only one more chapter out for the raw and this isn't an adaption. However, there's the description and how people tend not to understand what these words mean. Revenge and atonement are different in the way that forgiveness and redemption are. One is something that is done to you and another is something you do. If the crux of the story was about her getting revenge, then there is no atonement. The story is supposed to be about making up for their past wrongs.You sound pretty sure, is this an adeptation or something? Or are you pulling these out of thin air?
damn, that might change the whole thing. imagine if she's not the daughter instead.I believe the word "that" in his mother's line "I didn't tell her about that." refers to the fact that he went to jail, so effectively she only talked to Shiika about the what (mother and son not living together), not the why (his sentence).