Cool bro, maybe you should volunteer to proof read and run quality control for the next chapter instead of insulting the person that's giving you something to read.
The meat of the translation was fine, there were a couple phrases that sounded off, and some common mistakes, but nothing worth that kind of flaming.
This dude is putting out better translations than 90% of the work that most groups provide on here.
This dude is putting out better translations than 90% of the work that most groups provide on here.
It's sad how right you are on that part.
That said, absolutely yes it is. The mistakes made are violating the absolute basic rules of the English language, even the rules as they apply comic format.
Having worked for Revelion, Flame Scans, Galaxy Degen, LHTranslations (Perhaps you've seen some of my work if you're reading a series like this), and even Right-Dark Scans (unfortunately) as a PR, TS, QC, and MTL (also unfortunately), I can personally tell you that the work on this chapter was incredibly minimal and obviously lacked proper thought on anything beyond throwing the script through google translate and putting it back.
KS Manga projects are always a mixed bag, but plenty of the chapters of this series have been hit or miss with the quality and it's definitely been one of their weakest projects. With the number of publicly available resources for scanalation, I can personally say that there's little to no reason any group should be applying this little thought process to any series.
Even with my brain having been slowly dying off from metal poisoning, I can confidently say even my earliest jobs had better work to them than this.
I concede that there are reasons things like this happen, but failing the minimum of due-diligence, especially while taking money from your viewers and wanting more, is hardly something I've ever allowed or consider reasonable, even in my deteriorated state.
I'm also willing to concede that there was simply one person who fucked something up for everyone else. Working for Flame Scans and Right-dark, I had plenty of issues with my corrected scripts not being used at all.