Tapris Sugar Step - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Come back, senpai whom I look up to!

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Thank you for the translation! Happy New Years!

I adore Tapris, probably the only one that considers Satania an archdemon. It's also nice to see how Gabu cares for her, be it in this chapter or the previous one. I hope Kurona and Chiaki get to meet the rest of the cast, especially Raphie. I wonder how well Kurona would get with Vigne and Satania.
 
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Really not that important, but just a small suggestion - more contractions scattered throughout could make this read a lot smoother. But again, not that important.
 
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@atropicalpenguin You are welcome! And thanks! Happy New Years to you too and everyone as well! Yeah I want to see that, too!

@Ganchachos Oh, I actually thought I was supposed to use as less contractions as possible 🤔😬
 
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@Alexanpt Most of the time it comes off as overly formal or even downright robotic. I imagine it fits how Tapris speaks, probably not so much with Gabriel, though.
 
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Nice to see SOMEONE thinks Satania is a demon
 

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