Oi author, your little detective stories are ok and everything, but nothing we haven't seen before. It's fun, but give me more character depth, growth and interactions. If you'd used this whole chapter as a conclusion for the previous situation, it would've been perfect. Her being unconscious in bed, slowly waking up, him worrying about her, some bonding and slowly improving her situation. The way she is now, just a maid with no authority whatsoever is bound to get her killed sooner rather than later. I liked it more while she was that concubines maid, she was at least treated somewhat better... Basically, give us more real food, not only average detective snacks. Give her the opportunity to work again as a pharmacist or something, not clean windows... Didn't you say you want to use every possible tool to the best of their abilities? What happened?