Author is a woman? Ah yeah, it's all coming together now.
The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way
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this “author” is terrible and should stick to creating art, not horrendous fetishised and half-assed “manga” like this. There’s a website for their kind, NHentai. Although, I doubt they’d even get far, considering their art is nothing special and their ability to create a story is nonexistent. The creator of this garbage would be best creating art about how sorry they are for being nothing special. After they’ve created something, they should then send it to their family and hope for the best! I just know this author was having delusional thoughts while watching Koi Kaze.
“Why can’t this be Netorare! Why must a sister and brother not be the one cucking and the cuck!”
I know, author. Why can’t there be cheating in a romance manga? I know. It does not matter if they’re not dating. “romance”. I believe that is a genre, right? Maybe if you made a romance manga that actually was written by a competent author… wait… never mind, then the manga wouldn’t exist? Well…. cheating can work in a story, but whining about how people didn’t like you adding it to a “incest manga” and hiding it behind a paywall is quite sad. Perhaps instead of typing on twitter, you should read a “how to write” book. I would greatly consider it if I was you… to be honest, if I was you… I would be wishing to be isekai’d as a competent writer.
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I had the utmost pleasure seeing this “manga” on the popular new titles part of the website for so long. Everyday I saw this, was a day without happiness. It felt like I was getting gang banged by a bunch of men and then… I ended up on the doorstep of my brother’s unit. Or, it felt like sucking off a man and getting a call from my brother while doing it. Or, it felt like the man I was just sucking off, asking me if I wanted to get gang banged again. Sounds familiar, right?
“Why can’t this be Netorare! Why must a sister and brother not be the one cucking and the cuck!”
I know, author. Why can’t there be cheating in a romance manga? I know. It does not matter if they’re not dating. “romance”. I believe that is a genre, right? Maybe if you made a romance manga that actually was written by a competent author… wait… never mind, then the manga wouldn’t exist? Well…. cheating can work in a story, but whining about how people didn’t like you adding it to a “incest manga” and hiding it behind a paywall is quite sad. Perhaps instead of typing on twitter, you should read a “how to write” book. I would greatly consider it if I was you… to be honest, if I was you… I would be wishing to be isekai’d as a competent writer.
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I had the utmost pleasure seeing this “manga” on the popular new titles part of the website for so long. Everyday I saw this, was a day without happiness. It felt like I was getting gang banged by a bunch of men and then… I ended up on the doorstep of my brother’s unit. Or, it felt like sucking off a man and getting a call from my brother while doing it. Or, it felt like the man I was just sucking off, asking me if I wanted to get gang banged again. Sounds familiar, right?
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it’s garbage
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If you were thinking of dropping this, on a certain website, when you put in certain numbers, something happens. NTR garbage
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“Author”… it’s like calling trash, food.
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“Author”. Only thing they’re probably good at is writing letters to their family about how sorry they are for being nothing special.
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The NTR's been translated, and the bad translations on here have been fixed.
It's still awaiting approval on here, so here's a sneak peek .
It's still awaiting approval on here, so here's a sneak peek .
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I know what author want to make this story, to make her brother correct her behaviour or something, its like higehiro (you should check it out, it has wholesome manga involve slut fmc but still remain good how mc correct her) It still lack few different aspect.
1. She is still unwillingly do slut, the whole premise is about make her slut and turn her good woman right? Why is it so hard to make her slut. Like higehiro, Fmc literally sleep every guy for money, and suddenly meet mc who are chad, then correct her so hard then she never return to slut way again.
2. Contradict each other, nsfw chapter and sfw chapter really contradict, nsfw show her how slut she is but in sfw she is like got blackmail/threat etc. Dont put like "she got pressure", again keyword is "willingly" is it hard?
3. Why people keep telling this ntr? because its ntr plot, i know i know, they are not in relationship but again u cant go away from typical ntr plot, mc is virgin, and fmc is virgin, suddenly fmc get hook by people, become slut, then mc rescue her, she refused to be rescue, the end. Thats what this comic direction goes right now.
4. Its market as incest plot, first chapter, or chapter 0 basically mc m*lest her during her sleep. So everyone here for incest plot but we got r*pe and ntr possible plot. People would be mad, if they purchase car but they get bicycle right?
TLDR : im not mad about this, author can make her anything, its her creation, but remember if u want sell stuff, make the stuff like u describe when u market the thing. I still up for nsfw stuff, also still read sfw stuff also (completely turn off brain) but again i really hope this story could become higehiro or maybe better higehiro.
Cheers everyone, no offense, just point out my opinion
1. She is still unwillingly do slut, the whole premise is about make her slut and turn her good woman right? Why is it so hard to make her slut. Like higehiro, Fmc literally sleep every guy for money, and suddenly meet mc who are chad, then correct her so hard then she never return to slut way again.
2. Contradict each other, nsfw chapter and sfw chapter really contradict, nsfw show her how slut she is but in sfw she is like got blackmail/threat etc. Dont put like "she got pressure", again keyword is "willingly" is it hard?
3. Why people keep telling this ntr? because its ntr plot, i know i know, they are not in relationship but again u cant go away from typical ntr plot, mc is virgin, and fmc is virgin, suddenly fmc get hook by people, become slut, then mc rescue her, she refused to be rescue, the end. Thats what this comic direction goes right now.
4. Its market as incest plot, first chapter, or chapter 0 basically mc m*lest her during her sleep. So everyone here for incest plot but we got r*pe and ntr possible plot. People would be mad, if they purchase car but they get bicycle right?
TLDR : im not mad about this, author can make her anything, its her creation, but remember if u want sell stuff, make the stuff like u describe when u market the thing. I still up for nsfw stuff, also still read sfw stuff also (completely turn off brain) but again i really hope this story could become higehiro or maybe better higehiro.
Cheers everyone, no offense, just point out my opinion
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Is it one of those “what if” stories or is it just that bad?
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It's not a "what if", it's actually part of the main story. Normally, it is expected that stories published in the fanbox with a paywall are "what if" but the author decided to put part of the main story behind a paywall in the fanbox. Until chapter 3 the author tried to hide that it was part of the main story but in chapter 4 it becomes very clear that it is part of the main story.
To be honest I’m still confused. The story is all over the place yeah but I still have no idea why some of you are mad. I also think some of you are exaggerating. People will draw and publish what they want regardless of your sensibilities. Saying things “the author should stick to xyz” is nonsensical. Move on and go read other things instead.
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It's canon, and it's on the number site as 486501
I honestly think she just thought "Oh, it's porn, so they'll pay for it!" without thinking about the implications of hiding away crucial story elements from the public. She doesn't strike me as particularly bright.
Because the author's trying to make us believe this is a wholesome story, when it's the exact opposite, then charging us for the privilege of reading untagged NTR. Also, she had an entirely different audience; one openly hostile to the idea of NTR. Imagine if you style your youtube channel around vegan diets, then after you get some momentum, you turn around and focus on hunting, processing, and cooking your own meat, step by step, but only for paying subscribers. That's what happened here.
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Oke.. I get why ppl are so angry over this manga. But seriously tho, wth is wrong with him? Why make ntr instead of just Incest + Romance?Its not hard as there are a good amount of cases where the original story branched into NSFW, mostly just sex scenes without much context as it was just a little "thank you" from the author for its fans. (Mostly its safe as MC with the LI). But there were even scenes like these, aka ntr or rape but at least the author made it pretty clear -> 1. Its not cannon, 2. The version of the original and the "branched" version plays out completly different, 3. Its only aviable on his own private accounts. (Mind you if its a manhwa which is mainstream or has a publisher -> this shit wont even fly here.)
However, in this example, the author made either a very, very dumb mistake -> which I wont buy at all, or its what you said, bait for his fanbox. Not thats its uncommon these days but at least people didnt accepted it this time.
What I dont get, why was the "MC sleep molestation" removed from his twitter, pixiv AND fanbox (as I couldnt find it there except on exhentai/nhentai etc) but the NTR is still up on all of his sites as im pretty sure people are angry about the later.
Obviously the NTR scene ruined it as it was going to be more of a romance between MC and his sister.
Also I didnt understand what the author said last time. If he gonna change it, rework it, or let it as it is and hopes it will get ignored?
Edit: I found it out why:
- Author makes a Oneshot (Magic numbers are -> 482121) which is the MC molestation of her Sister, which was the very first chap (Ch.0). People liked it, told him to make more of it, aka a short story you see common in japanese twitter.
- Starts to make the series, with the real chapter (ch.1) being this we see here on mangadex, aka the beginning.
- With it getting more attention, so does the iron ire of Twitter. Since Its sleep molestation + Blood related it goes against the TOS, author deletes the sleep molestation (482121) but since the first was already out and it was established they blood related so he needed to redcon it, so he did into step-sis x stepbro. Hence he mentioned this on his fanbox: ,
- People didnt liked it
- During this time he already made the NTR/Orgy scene with the sister and the douches, people didnt liked it either. ,
- Nothing being mentioned of a rework or alternative scene about the disgusting NTR scene, but a continuation/progress with the next chap
So after all -> Creating a ero short story about incest, removing/destroying what the core audience wanted because of twitter, double down on the NTR in the hopes it will somehow been seen as "vanilla","romance" because the hardcore shit happens offscreen.
On a site note: Seems like the fans forced a correction on the tags.
Not worth reading because of what happend but also because of the disgusting NTR.
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It’s pretty obvious why people are mad.
1. makes an already uncomfortably weird incest manga that is surface level (read Koi Kaze instead)
2. Hints at rape and ntr
3. puts it behind a paywall and tries to play it off as never happening
4. confirmation of it happening
5. public release of ntr and rape chapter
6. ruins any elements of romantic buildup because of this and treates rape as “trivial”.
7 in conclusion, the “author“ is incompetent and should stop writin.
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I just realized.. tks for the guy's comment up there. So basically, it started first as an Incest stuff at ch 0 but then at Ch 1 it turned into generic Gangbang/rape/ntr shit right?
I mean like damn.. did the author even apologize to her followers on Pixiv? Imagine paying for Incest/Romance shit but u got ntr instead.. bruh.
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Yup for how it started and how it got changed, nope for the part about her saying sorry since -> she dosent see it as NTR. She blocked/muted deleted posts who criticized her until she had enough and takes a short break and draws something else.
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It's not rape. Where do people keep getting rape from?
Also, with the second fanbox, the author's set the precedent that the girl goes along with basically anything anyone does to her, and loves every second of it.
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You know what the irony is? These Manga artists should know best what is ntr and what is not.
She cannot just look at me dead in the eye and said “Story is about Incest/Romance, so even if Rape and Gangbang are included they’re not technically NTR .__.”
The fact that she even tried to please both the Vanilla and NTR fanbase is kinda funny. You cannot just have your Cake and eat it too.. so now it’s the fans fault right? Because everyone bought into the idea of sweet Alabama story but it turned into a generic Ntr story.
So is the newest Dream chapter gonna be the last? Cause the ship has already sailed, the damaged has been done.. ppl who paid for it wouldn’t give a damn anymore tho..
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