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HOLY SHIT WAAAAAAAAAT DAAAAA FUUUUUUUU
Her muscles were torn apart by presumably more than one stab. The bloody muscles had all fallen to one side. So that side had a bunch of blood coagulated in the muscles, while the other side was missing muscles. Also, I think you can probably heal something like the skin after death, as long as it's soon after. The body's individual cells would all still be alive, after all.I feel like the author intended for a much longer autopsy leading up to the stab wound but ran out of pages. It's full of holes. She was stabbed and bled out somewhere else, just before she died her skin was healed, her body was cleaned and redressed spotlessly, and dragged to bed without anyone noticing. Also I can't follow which side she was stabbed on. The first side examined had no resistance and no blood. They indicated this side was traumatic from the lack of resistance, but the other side had pooled blood which also indicated trauma.
Damn, that's right! I forgot the author was supposed to cater to your specific interests and short attention span and instead of what anyone else might want to read, like world-building or fleshing out relevant characters!Sudden two-chapter backstory on characters I don't know and don't care about. Why did the author do this?
EVERYBODY WANTS TO BE MY ENEMYYYYY
So, why did we need to waste 2chapters on this again? I guess the author really wanted to do a murder mystery?
Sigh.
So the author could develop important supporting cast members, show their relationships with other supporting characters and set plot threads for future payoffs. Well handled character development is not filler. This is solid writing, maybe if you'd stop licking the walls clean and actually learn to read you would notice it.Sudden two-chapter backstory on characters I don't know and don't care about. Why did the author do this?
To be fair, it's character development in a poor direction, which is why it felt like filler.So the author could develop important supporting cast members, show their relationships with other supporting characters and set plot threads for future payoffs. Well handled character development is not filler. This is solid writing, maybe if you'd stop licking the walls clean and actually learn to read you would notice it.