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too many layers in this one for me.
first she was engaged to a prince
then she met a dragon
then it turns out her mother was a dragon
then her stepdad made her believe she was not a dragon
then she cast a spell on everyone not knowing she was a dragon
any one of these alone is good enough for a plot I don't need a new piece of information every other page. good art though.
first she was engaged to a prince
then she met a dragon
then it turns out her mother was a dragon
then her stepdad made her believe she was not a dragon
then she cast a spell on everyone not knowing she was a dragon
any one of these alone is good enough for a plot I don't need a new piece of information every other page. good art though.