Ano Toki Tasukete Itadaita Monster Musume desu. - Ch. 2

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Also pg 25: a spider, a sapling, an octopus, a ghost, and a fish. So I'm guessing we'll have: an arachne, a dryad, a mermaid, and a yokai soon.
Pg 26 you missed the reptile, probably a dragon related species as hinted to in Ch 1 pg 36, as well as hidden in plain view in Ch 1 pgs 2 & 3 (and 33 flashback), both times sleeping at desk.
 
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That elf is gonna become an orc if he doesn't learn to behave.

Okay, Claudia has already become a waifu. We still have a spider, a plant, a ghost, a dragon, and a fish.
 
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Is it wrong if i see it kinda bit cute when the rude teacher cri?
Someone punch me back to reality please
 
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So

Arachne(spider)

Dryad(sapling)

Mermaid (fish)

Lich? (ghost)

Dragon (sleepy lizard)

and Kraken

My dude's got a full pocket monster girl team.
 
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My money is on him being super strong but just broken as a result of that flashback.
I mean, old man or not, he's still a summoned Hero. And we saw how powerful his magic was back when he was younger.

He probably just lost his confidence over the years and is a bit out of practice.
 
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Others covered most noticeable errors, but a few more that irked me:
> Page 10 - "That makes happy" - "me" is missing
> Page 28 - "A-bilities", you decided to hyphenate this word like that, really? Please, don't do that just to make even text lines.
> Page 31 - "Forgot-ten", well, less jarring, but still - really?
> Page 33 - "good thing of being a teacher" - "about", not "of"
Also, upside-down punctuation marks are not used in English.

Please do get someone to PR this (or give Mr Bombastic a slap on the wrist, if it's his job).
 

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