Dark Gathering - Vol. 12 Ch. 46 - Route 1 1: Animal realm

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Yayoi's monologue in her defense was basically 'I'll do whatever I want because angy' so in some ways it was even worse than what I expected
I mean, if your mom got kidnapped, and there's an angry god that wants to kill you, your friends, and some other third girl you know, I doubt you'd just sit down like "but... getting people killed is bad. D:"
if there are consequences to Anna, a spirit born from (albeit manipulated) dragging others into her own suffering,

What do you mean "Manipulated"? She was doing that of her own free will. Her entire thing is that she wants everyone to suffer just like her. This is the ultimate Karmic justice for her.
 
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I mean, if your mom got kidnapped, and there's an angry god that wants to kill you, your friends, and some other third girl you know, I doubt you'd just sit down like "but... getting people killed is bad. D:"


What do you mean "Manipulated"? She was doing that of her own free will. Her entire thing is that she wants everyone to suffer just like her. This is the ultimate Karmic justice for her.
It's kind of amusing to me that you don't see the parallels between both of these responses, and react to essentially the same impression of dragging people into problems caused by a threat that is outside your control at immense risk to them in a completely different way depending on the character.

Also, everyone seems to forget Anna wasn't actually the tunnel ghost, she was just a victim of it being trapped and used as bait by it after being tortured to death and while being tortured posthumously by it - and presumably only not being tortured when someone else is, or when she was being bait. That's the manipulation. Subtract the tunnel ghost and there's nothing to drag anyone into... AFAIK. IIRC she manifests briefly being upset at how unfair her circumstances were after the tunnel ghost is sealed but she didn't hurt anyone else and she gets sealed without making much of a fuss. It was a while ago that I read those parts, and I think because it was released so long ago peope forget that scenario worked in a very unique way compared to others we've seen.

Meanwhile Yayoi is doing the nonsensical "I'm so angry that everything I do for revenge is justified no matter who else suffers" trope common in poorly written works, especially when authors (this particular line seems more common with manga authors, might be a cultural thing - I don't recall seeing it in many manhuas or manhwas unless the whole thing is a revenge fantasy) realize too late they've had their protagonists do something with consequences to their character they didn't think out fully when they wrote it and now it's too late to change, so they need to justify it in a way that sounds edgy and cool to them. It's so obviously a meta mistake being kludged, but in a way that now makes any thought of 'poetic justice' for Anna hypocritical because she could have used exactly the same justification as Yayoi, even assuming she's somehow more deserving of yet more imprisonment punctuated by new and horrific kinds of suffering than the ghost that was torturing her and is, IIRC, sitting in one of their dolls doing just fine at home right now.

Bottom line: Yayoi's justification is weak as hell, but if it satisfies you, then saying Anna deserves what she's getting is a contradiction regardless of your impressions of her, because using revenge to justify not caring about consequences applies to all consequences. That's the scope of the kludge here.

At least the ghosts are nice to look at.
 
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IIRC she manifests briefly being upset at how unfair her circumstances were after the tunnel ghost is sealed but she didn't hurt anyone else and she gets sealed without making much of a fuss.
no she tried to kill them by crashing the car

Meanwhile Yayoi is doing the nonsensical "I'm so angry that everything I do for revenge is justified no matter who else suffers" trope common in poorly written works
she doesnt think its justified, shes just not going to let that stop her, she will hunt ghosts and if someone gets caught up in that and dies, then sucks to be them but the ghost needed to be got
 
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It's kind of amusing to me that you don't see the parallels between both of these responses, and react to essentially the same impression of dragging people into problems caused by a threat that is outside your control at immense risk to them in a completely different way depending on the character.
These are entirely different situations. One is trying to save the people she cares about, the other is a spiteful monster who lingered around as a ghost.
Also, everyone seems to forget Anna wasn't actually the tunnel ghost, she was just a victim of it being trapped and used as bait by it after being tortured to death and while being tortured posthumously by it - and presumably only not being tortured when someone else is, or when she was being bait.
You may want to re-read/watch the F tunnel arc. She's specifically trying to get other people tortured out of a warped sense of fairness. This isn't a "I'll be fine if I make someone else suffer in my place" thing, it's a "KNOWING THAT OTHER PEOPLE ARE SUFFERING LIKE ME IS THE GREATEST FEELING EVER" thing. Only the people further in the tunnel are trying to swap with anyone; she's just trying to get people tortured.
IIRC she manifests briefly being upset at how unfair her circumstances were after the tunnel ghost is sealed but she didn't hurt anyone else and she gets sealed without making much of a fuss. It was a while ago that I read those parts, and I think because it was released so long ago peope forget that scenario worked in a very unique way compared to others we've seen.
She tried to kill them by crashing the car and was only subdued with relative ease because she's small potatoes compared to the ghosts Yayoi usually targets. Her entire introduction was about her gruesome death, and how glad she was that someone else suffered with her, and is about to suffer with her. It's right there on Chapter 17, page 34.

I don't blame you for this lapse in memory, but I'd appreciate it if you acknowledged that you just forgot the events in the first place.
any thought of 'poetic justice' for Anna hypocritical because she could have used exactly the same justification as Yayoi, even assuming she's somehow more deserving of yet more imprisonment punctuated by new and horrific kinds of suffering than the ghost that was torturing her and is, IIRC, sitting in one of their dolls doing just fine at home right now.
You're trying to compare apples to oranges here, since one is trying to get people tortured deliberately, while the other is indifferent to the suffering of evil ghosts, and trying her best to minimize collateral damage.
 
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These are entirely different situations. One is trying to save the people she cares about, the other is a spiteful monster who lingered around as a ghost.
I agree the situations are different - the point I'm making is Yayoi's justification is so broad and poorly reasoned that any consequences - including her just getting 5 people killed (no, "they were totes bad people" doesn't justify it retroactively; it's a decision Yayoi makes without knowing what the consequences will be or even trying to find out) - are fine in her eyes, because she feels sufficient "conviction." It's lazy and stupid retroactive justification. Remember, it's not the demise of ghosts that Yayoi is justifying here.

it's a "KNOWING THAT OTHER PEOPLE ARE SUFFERING LIKE ME IS THE GREATEST FEELING EVER"
I don't know that there's really much evidence for THAT specific mindset in the text, more like "I've suffered unfairly, so you suffering is the only way to make it fair". She says specifically that it's relief on the page you mention. It's closer to crab in a bucket mentality then "watching my fellow crab suffer brings me great joy" mentality. However, you're right:
you just forgot the events
I didn't remember the attempted car crash. It was a very brief interaction that kind of came out of left field. You can see it on pages 6-10 of chapter 20, and it just looks like jealousy because of unfair suffering (i.e. "you got saved but I didn't, so I'm throwing a tantrum"), not some sadistic joy from the suffering of others. I think it is safer to say she deserves what's happened to her than I originally thought (though I would like to see some acknowledgement of how much she's protected Eiko at this point), but to be honest I can't tell what exactly what the author wants people to think of her given the last time we've seen her was a strangely long torture sequence with gratuitous shots of her thighs, but I'm sure whatever it is will be retroactively justified either way. That's what this manga does.

Interestingly, on page 11 the narration describes her as among 30 "almost evil ghosts."
indifferent to the suffering of evil ghosts
Her justification here is about indifference after getting those 5 living people killed before even fully scouting the area. Those priests were not evil ghosts. Be honest about what it is she's justifying in that conversation.

Now, they were of course retroactively revealed to be "evil" (I mean really it's only the guy who killed his wife, there's a throwaway line about splitting the money to make them all culpable but it doesn't explain why there was money to split, given to a guy who had no other family besides his dying wife and was supposed to die anyway - or if everyone else there even knew why he was supposed to die), but I'm getting a bit sick of this manga doing that whenever something goes sideways. Especially when it changes something the characters didn't know beforehand. It even bleeds into the fights ("uM aCkShUaLlY the ghost you just saw explode/character you just saw die is now more powerful/was totally safe and we had this discussion earlier but you just weren't shown it). It's something bad writers use as a crutch when they can't do legitimate tension well, so they have to lie about the tension beforehand and walk it back afterwards.

That problem being so pervasive with this work is the entire reason I correctly predicted the priests would later be revealed to "totally be doomed anyway, the seal was compromised so it would have come undone eventually" - you rely on the crutch too much and it stops being useful for tension because people can see the walk-back coming a mile away, and if you switch it up it turns into "why did they suddenly become stupid and unprepared this time, where's the walk-back you always wait till after to show us?" It's a crutch that should be avoided because it can destroy the story's ability to create tension altogether.
 
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I agree the situations are different - the point I'm making is Yayoi's justification is so broad and poorly reasoned that any consequences - including her just getting 5 people killed (no, "they were totes bad people" doesn't justify it retroactively; it's a decision Yayoi makes without knowing what the consequences will be or even trying to find out) - are fine in her eyes, because she feels sufficient "conviction." It's lazy and stupid retroactive justification. Remember, it's not the demise of ghosts that Yayoi is justifying here.
She's not "Justifying" anything. Read the chapter again. She's explicitly saying she's left morality at the door, and if anyone has a problem with it, they can haunt her after death. Also, what do you think that expression of hers was on Ch. 51, P. 24-25? Constipation? She obviously hates what happened. Surely you don't need every little thing spelled out for you.
(no, "they were totes bad people" doesn't justify it retroactively; it's a decision Yayoi makes without knowing what the consequences will be or even trying to find out)
If we're talking about her knowledge justifying her actions or not, there's no precedent for "Jewish demon army"; it's literally a first for her, and the very idea that literal demonic entities lurk with their unholy slaves was, as of yet, not even on the table. This situation is so far beyond even her wildest experiences that there's no way she could possibly have foreseen a haunting like that.
I didn't remember the attempted car crash. It was a very brief interaction that kind of came out of left field. You can see it on pages 6-10 of chapter 20, and it just looks like jealousy because of unfair suffering (i.e. "you got saved but I didn't, so I'm throwing a tantrum"), not some sadistic joy from the suffering of others.
You're reading too much into this. The entire point of these things is that they're lingering masses of malice and hatred: Their only motivations are survival, and sadism. If you try to paint their reactions as some rational response to whatever situation they're in, you've misunderstood the point of this story. She wants others to suffer like her. That's the entire thing. She lured people in so they'd be tortured, and she's mad that they're not going to be tortured anymore. Her own salvation never came up, and it wasn't a factor.
 
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She's not "Justifying" anything. Read the chapter again. She's explicitly saying she's left morality at the door, and if anyone has a problem with it, they can haunt her after death. Also, what do you think that expression of hers was on Ch. 51, P. 24-25? Constipation? She obviously hates what happened. Surely you don't need every little thing spelled out for you.
Mate, if you think "leaving morality at the door" doesn't justify anything to the person saying it, you don't understand what the word 'morality' means. You're reading remorse into a frown and completely oblivious to the fact Yayoi just threatened to kill anyone who disagrees with her (did you think she meant to haunt her after they died of old age?)
If we're talking about her knowledge justifying her actions or not, there's no precedent for "Jewish demon army"; it's literally a first for her, and the very idea that literal demonic entities lurk with their unholy slaves was, as of yet, not even on the table. This situation is so far beyond even her wildest experiences that there's no way she could possibly have foreseen a haunting like that.
I was talking about the priests, not this non sequitur. The fact it's a Jewish demon army has less than nothing to do with what I said - not to mention that a possessed spirit army is very much within their wheelhouse.

The temple was right there and she didn't even check it before breaking in, breaking through a wall, and breaking a seal. She didn't have the information because she didn't try to get it, which is uncharacteristically stupid for Yayoi.
You're reading too much into this.
So I'm the one reading too much into this even though you're the one reading sadistic joy into something to fit your poetic justice idea. And (explicitly unstated) remorse from Yayoi frowning once. I know why you want that to be what the text is, and I'd think it was a pretty compelling narrative if that's what the dialogue indicated... but it's just not in those pages, and facial scrunching is not enough to put it there. Maybe that's the framing the author will go for, but it'll be retroactive either way... as usual.
The entire point of these things is that they're lingering masses of malice and hatred: Their only motivations are survival, and sadism. If you try to paint their reactions as some rational response
You're really off the rails here. The priest spirit isn't lingering out of sadism or survival, for one thing. And many of these spirits are shown to have human intelligence - they are characters in this story, not all mindless enemies fueled by sadism so you can enjoy their agony remorselessly. Some of them you can, sure - but to say that about all of them means you haven't really been paying attention. And, as I'll remind you - at least 30 of them are described as 'almost evil' by the absolute authority that is the narrator... meaning those 30 can't be balls of pure malice by definition; there's nothing 'almost' about what you're imagining here.

You might want to reread the interactions with the sketchbook ghost, because there's clearly more to this than the vengeful automata you seem to think all these things are, there... they were able to strategize with it, including over its own aesthetics for fuck's sake. What part of designing a mech appearance falls under "being of pure sadism and survival", exactly?
 
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Mate, if you think "leaving morality at the door" doesn't justify anything to the person saying it, you don't understand what the word 'morality' means.
it doesn't. She isn't. She's literally saying the people can haunt her if they have a problem. I don't suggest that people try getting revenge on me for helping children, and she's not suggesting they get revenge for any "good" she does. You seem to have a consistent problem understanding people's emotions and motivations, which is weird for me to say, considering I'm probably the only autistic one in this conversation.
You're reading remorse into a frown and completely oblivious to the fact Yayoi just threatened to kill anyone who disagrees with her
That's not what she said. That's not even close to what she said. What's your first language? I might be able to translate the chapters into that one for you.
I was talking about the priests, not this non sequitur. The fact it's a Jewish demon army has less than nothing to do with what I said - not to mention that a possessed spirit army is very much within their wheelhouse.
I was talking about the Jewish demon army. If you want to blame her for killing five jerks who screwed themselves in spite of the fact that she didn't know at the time, then you can't then turn around and blame her for unleashing the most dangerous, unprecedented abomination to date. Either knowledge factors into her culpability, or it doesn't. Unless you're about to tell me it would have been bad for her to get the priests killed if she knew they were jerks in the first place. Which is fine by me, but then I don't know what we're arguing about here.
o I'm the one reading too much into this even though you're the one reading sadistic joy into something to fit your poetic justice idea.
Yes. I'm going by the things she literally says, and the general behaviors of the ghosts we've seen all throughout the manga. They're monomaniacal abominations who can't be reasoned with; they are unreasonable. So when one of them says "I want to eat your nutsack", and he tries to drag you into a room, I can only conclude he wants to bite your nutsack off for its own sake.

Meanwhile this girl's trying to get people tortured, and you're off theorizing like "oh my god, this poor baby girl is just an unfortunate, manipulated victim who's just trying to make the pain stooop because the torture ghost doesn't torture her when he's torturing other peoooople, and now that she's not saaaaved, she's mad, so she lost her temper and did an oopsie with the caaar", when it's like "No, she just wants everyone else to be as miserable as her".

Now as a fellow autist, I understand facial expressions can be hard, but if you pay attention, despite the fact that it got peeled off, you can see the mouth curving upwards at the corner when she finally revealed herself. And if that's not clear enough in the manga, you can look at episode 14 of the anime, where they actually show it closed for a few frames, and clearly curved up.

You're really off the rails here. The priest spirit isn't lingering out of sadism or survival, for one thing. And many of these spirits are shown to have human intelligence - they are characters in this story, not all mindless enemies fueled by sadism so you can enjoy their agony remorselessly.
Yeah, the one time we got a spirit turning from "evil" to some other kind of spirit, (The waterfall amalgam), she literally describes her state as feral, overcome with anger and hatred. Until they got rid of the fetish that was keeping her in that state, there was no negotiating with her. The majority of ghosts of import we see behaving even a little bit are ones who are specifically bound to them, and liable to take damage in their place as substitutes.
And, as I'll remind you - at least 30 of them are described as 'almost evil' by the absolute authority that is the narrator... meaning those 30 can't be balls of pure malice by definition; there's nothing 'almost' about what you're imagining here.
What's your point? You consider regular ghosts to be the exact same creatures as the evil spirits we're talking about? Because I don't see what bringing in some separate class of being is adding to this conversation. By that standard, there are hundreds, thousands even, of just normal ghosts that are too harmless and inconsequential to even mention.
 

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