@Sekiryuutei134 I agree, you should continue doing it. The translation quality isn't bad at all, and having someone with insight into DnD will probably help contextualize a lot of the dialogue that might be lost on others. In regards to explaining mechanics, I would just leave a link to the 5e compendium or something. This clearly runs by a few rules that don't exist in normal DnD, so it's hard to even explain to someone. After all, you could tell them a rule, and the next chapter immediately breaks that rule for the sake of a story point.
Speed of character building is terrible, it feels like author tries to cramp all of "life lessons" in as few chapters and little timeline as possible to the point of making it look ridiculous.
its better to w8 till 6~9 more chap are released. just went through the raw (upto 18 ch)
elf village was razed by dragon. remaining elf ran away to this said human village. some black cloaked guys arrived. villegers betreyed and elfs were captured by those black cloaked guys. (its always better not to trust humans. humans are filled with greed aftrall). elder sister takes the full burnt of the black dragon. villagers knelt and prayed something b4 the dragon. human village was also burning. idk what happened to captured elves. This is just my rant---- I just wonder why there has to be slavery in every isekai? isnt it time for us move away from barbaric ideologies? idea of slavery just doesn't sit good with me D:
I don't know if I like this, on the one hand they seem to understand D&D isn't just a rigidly defined rulebook that you must never stray from(I'm lookin at you Goblin Slayer), but on the other hand the twists here seem kinda predictable in a bad way so far.
The paladin looked evil from the start and it was obvious he was hiding something, and the villager's hiding something in the shed was not subtle at all, it would have been better if it was a smokehouse or something and they were really intent on guarding it to let the audience put things together themselves. Basically the author has already used subversion twice neither of which really worked all that well, and I'm worried they're going to fall back on it again or turn this into an "everybody is evil" sorta story.
Overall I would say this: while adhering closely to D&D stuff to the point of being game-y, knows how to use D&D a lot better than a lot of off brand D&D settings I've seen, it's just that they need to work on hiding the nuts and bolts better so they're telling a story with D&D rules in the background and not a halfway point to literally having people sit around a table rolling dice.