@CelticMutt, this is my 1st new chapter. until now i was catching up
@linkhuesitos15 said:
How can a Plot twist no being a surprise when all the story was arranged to send you to the opposite direction or there wasn't any clue?
@linkhuesitos15 said:
How can a Plot twist no being a surprise when all the story was arranged to send you to the opposite direction or there wasn't any clue?
oh yes it is, there are so many asspulls and sudden jumps in logic and convinient situations its nothing but a convoluted mess, and thats without bringing up the shitty chronologic way of telling it.its not a convoluted mess
its superior to everything I read