The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way - Ch. 4 - The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out

[IronMan659]

This is quite uncomfortable to read....

 

[CDoom]

EDIT: Wait a second. I don't think you got the whole thing. The first and second pages are just the chapter. The third page features what I'm talking about, The fourth has him with the tip in, fifth is the slam, sixth is the full gangbang.

Going to straight up apologize here.

I was told I didn't see the whole thing from someone else and was linked new leaks, and yeah, where I got my pics from were missing a page. I'm going to own up to this. I had a completely invalid understanding.

I did a quick personal translation of the dialogue of the page I missed and none of the white bubbles are from the girl, made pretty obvious because of all the chuckles and Ws. But yes, she was awake, not passed out. It re-contextualizes the next pages, so I argued on a flawed interpretation. I'm not going to get into whether it was rape or not, because while she did drink, it's ambiguous enough about why she was there. I think if you think she was there to get fucked, that's valid. But if you think she was there to hang with people and not get fucked, that's also valid.

Nevertheless, I still hope the story has a happy ending. The presentation of the story is ass (which I'd personally argue is because this is fanbox bait), but as I said before I think the art's good and would like to see it turn out to have a happy ending, earned or not.

 

[Armadyx]

Probably something along those lines. Maybe in the dream it's her brother's D.

It is, actually. Basically, it goes:
1. Her brother is wiping her down, and is teasing her about it. Underbust galore
2. Her nipples harden, and the brother pulls her shirt up before pinching them.
3. Their genitals rub together (through underwear) She closes her eyes...
4. She wakes up, her brother isn't there. A dream. The brother calls out from the other side of the door he's coming in

 

[HoangDinh]

the blood related stuff with the unconsensual stuff (sleep sex) got retconed.

damn 😔

 

[HoangDinh]

See, and thats why people say its still NTR because she got "stolen" in that fanbox scene. I mean since its a erotica, the sexual stuff is here the main point. The only main love interest getting her holes split rosted + brain fucked out (heart eyes), her enjoying it like in your typical nhentai doujinshi female protag, her going the next day to the same fucker and sucking his dick again + slurping it down, is where you already crossed the NTR line.

The thing as you said, its not technically, hence the japanse artist came up with new terms like "BSS". Here, its a bit specific as the MC dosent love her romanticly YET (well we dont really know so far) but the thing is she fucks around. Which for a romance story is a very bad thing. Not that I say you cant do such stuff, but as you saw the comments are in the majortiy hating it. Because what happend offscreen -> the fanbox stuff is meant to piss people off, aka NTR... I mean she even said that in her stream today lol.

Depending how bad the backlash is she will either make more or not. But its still a lost case because of what happend. But I think how pissed off she got she will add more, mostly because she is a female and they dont look at NTR like we do, hence her saying its not NTR, or in her own words "well, its not really NTR, right ? Really NTR would be much worse." So if even the same author who tried to defend it, acknowledge it as NTR but its "light" lol, then I think the ongoing debate if its NTR or not is done.

this is gonna be like Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki then

 

[Litreara]

It is, actually. Basically, it goes:
1. Her brother is wiping her down, and is teasing her about it. Underbust galore
2. Her nipples harden, and the brother pulls her shirt up before pinching them.
3. Their genitals rub together (through underwear) She closes her eyes...
4. She wakes up, her brother isn't there. A dream. The brother calls out from the other side of the door he's coming in

So it seems to me that after the backlash the author either gave up or delayed doing the blowjob scene that was implicit in chapter 4.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Going to straight up apologize here.

I was told I didn't see the whole thing from someone else and was linked new leaks, and yeah, where I got my pics from were missing a page. I'm going to own up to this. I had a completely invalid understanding.

I did a quick personal translation of the dialogue of the page I missed and none of the white bubbles are from the girl, made pretty obvious because of all the chuckles and Ws. But yes, she was awake, not passed out. It re-contextualizes the next pages, so I argued on a flawed interpretation. I'm not going to get into whether it was rape or not, because while she did drink, it's ambiguous enough about why she was there. I think if you think she was there to get fucked, that's valid. But if you think she was there to hang with people and not get fucked, that's also valid.

Nevertheless, I still hope the story has a happy ending. The presentation of the story is ass (which I'd personally argue is because this is fanbox bait), but as I said before I think the art's good and would like to see it turn out to have a happy ending, earned or not.

I gotta say: This is very big of you, and I respect the hell out of you for coming back to admit fault. You're clearly a sensible, honorable, and above all else, honest, man, and you have my sincerest apologies for having called you a liar.

As for the "fanbox bait" bit, my honest guess is she started off by making porn, realized it wasn't going to fly on her sites, then quickly reworked it to be good for said sites. The problem is the same one you get when any porn artists try to dial back the porn for widespread release: They don't have an objective sense for how deviant the original is, so they keep a bunch of details that seriously harm the quality of the work.

The sister being a slut worked fine for the original, since the entire goal was to have a netori incest story, and I don't have to care about anyone. Since the brother can't "correct" her like in the original, she dialed that back to something less sexual, but forgot that nobody actually likes sluts, and don't care to "save" them from themselves. So now we're stuck with a tacked-on wholesome A plot, just to keep the name and premise, and a B plot that was has to take the place of the original plot.

P.S.: You thought the bubbles were from the girl? Now I'm curious to know what you thought was happening with all that talking.

It is, actually. Basically, it goes:
1. Her brother is wiping her down, and is teasing her about it. Underbust galore
2. Her nipples harden, and the brother pulls her shirt up before pinching them.
3. Their genitals rub together (through underwear) She closes her eyes...
4. She wakes up, her brother isn't there. A dream. The brother calls out from the other side of the door he's coming in

So wait, the "p" was for "pages" this time? Last time "3P" was for the number of people involved. That's inconsistent, and misleading.

So it seems to me that after the backlash the author either gave up or delayed doing the blowjob scene that was implicit in chapter 4.

She's completely cornered herself by making this NTR in the first place. If sis had just been raped, we wouldn't be having this issue.

this is gonna be like Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki then

Bro, that title is cursed.

 

[CDoom]

P.S.: You thought the bubbles were from the girl? Now I'm curious to know what you thought was happening with all that talking.

Nah I only saw 2 words from the girl, one saying "kimochii/it feels good" and one on final page saying "motto/more".

I knew the white bubbles on the pages I saw were from the guys only. I just remembered you said she was actively commenting so I wanted to check the dialogue I missed.

 

[2hot4you]

So where can i find this stuff? So i can avoid it and never see it of course

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

So where can i find this stuff? So i can avoid it and never see it of course

You sure you're going to actively look for NTR? Wouldn't you rather look at something less morally questionable, like bestiality, or loli?

Well ok...

It's on the funny number site. The prime factors for the code are:
2, 3, 5, 5, 41, 79

 

[IronMan659]

Umm... so about that Fanbox people keep mentioning...

I'm sorry to burst your bubble.

EDIT: The fanbox is now NTR, and she's an enthusiastic slut. This story is NTR, MC is the cuck, FMC is eager to fuck, and the best we can hope for is that he "fixes" her, despite the fact that she loves what she's doing.

They spend a page talking about how MC is into her because they're not blood related, and making light of the situation while she grinds on one of the guys.

Ahh.... so there is no salvation......

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Ahh.... so there is no salvation......

485850

Obvious NTR warning. Just look at that every time you see the author trying to tell you she's uncomfortable, and innocent, and pitiable, like in this chapter. It's all just the author trying to have her cake and eat it too.

 

[Mirazu]

So whats the catch. Is this just going to be ntrbait until the end

She got gangbanged. There are a few missing pages in here, but you can check them on the other site.

 

[thedinowarrior]

Used goods confirmed? Abandon the ship

LOL USED GOODS IS CRAZY

 

[SpeedMonkeySonic]

She enjoyed the ganbang and she's basically begging for more in this chapter(going alone to your fucker house without reason is basically asking for more for me)
Am I supposed to feel sorry for her or something?
Nobody told her to come to this house but she's acting like the guy forced her
Is this author trying to troll us or something because it sur seem like it
The romance aspect (if it was supoosed to be a romance but in the twitter she's saying family love) is ruined already
Shitty author san should just ditch the whole story with the brother altogether and just do a story with her being run by everyone now

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

She enjoyed the ganbang and she's basically begging for more in this chapter(going alone to your fucker house without reason is basically asking for more for me)

Oh no, didn't you see her reason?! She "forgot something"!

Am I supposed to feel sorry for her or something?
Nobody told her to come to this house but she's acting like the guy forced her
Is this author trying to troll us or something because it sur seem like it

Bruh, the author thinks the first chapter wasn't NTR. She spent hours the other day putting out fires, and locking the tags on her Pixiv so nobody would be able to out the contents of the story.

Shitty author san should just ditch the whole story with the brother altogether and just do a story with her being run by everyone now

Hell, just changing the first fanbox to some kind of rape would probably fix most of the issues. Either they get her when she's passed out, or she's clearly struggling. Or hell, just have get get molested in chapter 1 instead of fucked, then make this mega slut incident a "what-if" hypothetical where the brother's "correction" is unwelcome and ineffective.

 

[DaBoySwag77]

this is gonna be like Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki then

Nah, Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki is full cuck story through and through. Here you have to look it from the authors perspective: "I dont see it as NTR, hence I dont feel bad about doing/creating it since i dont/cant understand how male feel/think. So its all Drama guys!"
Honestly its not that deep here what she wanted to create but whats odd is the sudden change since as we already know she wanted just to make a wincest story about sis x brother who is annoying to him so he fucks her more and more (How god it always wanted ), but changed into "I need to help this poor non-related sister tho she just is a town bike but instead of sex I will nurse her"...

@Litreara
She delayed but she lost motivation she said because of it. I doubt she will drop it for good but probably will do something more light hearted and once the drama is behind her and her mind is free of it -> pick it up again. Honestly speaking I doubt this will take long, probably 2-3 days/posts and thats it.

485850

Obvious NTR warning. Just look at that every time you see the author trying to tell you she's uncomfortable, and innocent, and pitiable, like in this chapter. It's all just the author trying to have her cake and eat it too.

Exactly.

 

[Nokora]

485850

Obvious NTR warning. Just look at that every time you see the author trying to tell you she's uncomfortable, and innocent, and pitiable, like in this chapter. It's all just the author trying to have her cake and eat it too.

Just to add to this
Around 5 hours ago an english translated version was uploaded

486321

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Just to add to this
Around 5 hours ago an english translated version was uploaded

486321

It's a stilted translation. I'll be getting to work on a better one now.

 

[Nokora]

It's a stilted translation. I'll be getting to work on a better one now.

Oh nice! Thank you for that!

Honestly though I'm just glad to see it getting posted so people can see what all the talk is about.