Yuusha ni Zenbu Ubawareta Ore wa Yuusha no Hahaoya to Party wo Kumimashita! - Ch. 16

[Asynchria]

Thanks for trying!

 

[Bel-Shug]

From a glance, I see many people dislike the MC idea of punishment.
I personally think this one is pretty decent punishment.

Considering their good behavior (to MC mostly), he kinda give them second chance and punishment combined into one.
If they improve, they might gain happiness but if they don't, they will certainly receive their karma.
But MC don't actually care if they will change or not, since he care more about his new life with the 4 wife.

While I still prefer someone like Raoul, this MC certainly more preferable than MC that refuse to punish/condemn villain properly.
Good job to the MC and author.

As side note, I kinda like Charlotte the daughter of former noble(?).
Cute design and her hobby reminded me of Maomao from Kusuriya a bit.

 

[yukixmirai]

latest update was post yesterday. the very next day someone decide to snipe it. for god sake why do people keep sniping a series that already have a good scanlator working on it. there's ton of years old abandoned suggestive manga with free raw at rawkuma that you can scanlate to if you want for example:-

- Succubus & Hitman
20 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/a90b8d56-4900-41fb-bdbe-49f812fe2807/succubus-hitman
43 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/succubus-and-hitman/

- Class Teni de Ore dake Haburaretara, Doukyuu Harem Tsukuru Koto ni Shita
- After being transported, I was singled out and rejected by my classmates so; I made them all part of my harem
20 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/1c5952d2...uraretara-doukyuu-harem-tsukuru-koto-ni-shita
45.2 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/because-i...nsfer-i-decided-to-steal-my-classmates-lover/

- Isekai Saikou no Kizoku, Harem wo Fuyasu Hodo Tsuyoku Naru
- The Best Noble In Another World: The Bigger My Harem Gets, The Stronger I Become
24 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/b4d247b6...u-no-kizoku-harem-wo-fuyasu-hodo-tsuyoku-naru
36 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/isekai-saikyou-no-kizoku-harem-wo-fuyasu-hodo-tsuyoku-naru/

- Sekai wo Sukuu Tame ni Watashi to Asa Chun Dekimasu ka?
- To Save the World, Can You Wake Up the Morning After with a Demi-Human?
7 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/7921e755...sukuu-tame-ni-watashi-to-asa-chun-dekimasu-ka
39 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/sekai-wo-sukuu-tame-ni-aijin-to-asa-chun-dekimasu-ka/

- Magika Swordsman and Summoner
- Magika no Kenshi to Shoukan Maou
76 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/60773286-5af5-4ebe-98ae-5495bfcc1fcb/magika-swordsman-and-summoner
117 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/magika-no-kenshi-to-shoukan-maou/

- Hitokui Dungeon e Youkoso!
- Welcome to the Man-Eating Dungeon
7 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/0ae7e7cb-6bdd-45e6-9a86-7225774b5d1d/hitokui-dungeon-e-youkoso-the-comic
35 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/welcome-to-the-man-eating-dungeon/

- JK Haru is a Sex Worker in Another World
- JK Haru Wa Isekai De Shoufu Ni Natta
16 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/7c60af75...de4b/jk-haru-is-a-sex-worker-in-another-world
44.5 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/jk-haru-wa-isekai-de-shoufu-ni-natta/

- Destiny Lovers
19 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/db2d52e8-317a-4e60-b365-5368f8ea1bb6/destiny-lovers
159 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/destiny-lovers/

- etc...

 

[ZenMasters]

latest update was post yesterday. the very next day someone decide to snipe it. for god sake why do people keep sniping a series that already have a good scanlator working on it. there's ton of years old abandoned suggestive manga with free raw at rawkuma that you can scanlate to if you want for example:-

- Succubus & Hitman
20 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/a90b8d56-4900-41fb-bdbe-49f812fe2807/succubus-hitman
43 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/succubus-and-hitman/

- Class Teni de Ore dake Haburaretara, Doukyuu Harem Tsukuru Koto ni Shita
- After being transported, I was singled out and rejected by my classmates so; I made them all part of my harem
20 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/1c5952d2...uraretara-doukyuu-harem-tsukuru-koto-ni-shita
45.2 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/because-i...nsfer-i-decided-to-steal-my-classmates-lover/

- Isekai Saikou no Kizoku, Harem wo Fuyasu Hodo Tsuyoku Naru
- The Best Noble In Another World: The Bigger My Harem Gets, The Stronger I Become
24 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/b4d247b6...u-no-kizoku-harem-wo-fuyasu-hodo-tsuyoku-naru
36 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/isekai-saikyou-no-kizoku-harem-wo-fuyasu-hodo-tsuyoku-naru/

- Sekai wo Sukuu Tame ni Watashi to Asa Chun Dekimasu ka?
- To Save the World, Can You Wake Up the Morning After with a Demi-Human?
7 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/7921e755...sukuu-tame-ni-watashi-to-asa-chun-dekimasu-ka
39 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/sekai-wo-sukuu-tame-ni-aijin-to-asa-chun-dekimasu-ka/

- Magika Swordsman and Summoner
- Magika no Kenshi to Shoukan Maou
76 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/60773286-5af5-4ebe-98ae-5495bfcc1fcb/magika-swordsman-and-summoner
117 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/magika-no-kenshi-to-shoukan-maou/

- Hitokui Dungeon e Youkoso!
- Welcome to the Man-Eating Dungeon
7 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/0ae7e7cb-6bdd-45e6-9a86-7225774b5d1d/hitokui-dungeon-e-youkoso-the-comic
35 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/welcome-to-the-man-eating-dungeon/

- JK Haru is a Sex Worker in Another World
- JK Haru Wa Isekai De Shoufu Ni Natta
16 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/7c60af75...de4b/jk-haru-is-a-sex-worker-in-another-world
44.5 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/jk-haru-wa-isekai-de-shoufu-ni-natta/

- Destiny Lovers
19 chapter, https://mangadex.org/title/db2d52e8-317a-4e60-b365-5368f8ea1bb6/destiny-lovers
159 chapter, https://rawkuma.com/manga/destiny-lovers/

Add "Diner" to that list: https://mangadex.org/title/62d96fe4-cfb1-450f-a6f8-119f3528b44b/diner

 

[cesar024]

Hardcore revenge

 

[Rafalga]

So after last chapter and this one, it is confirmed. MC is retarded as fuck.

 

[Foxhouse]

Wait so he just assuming the outcome of his plan. And giving lip service to woman. This dude is something.

 

[jorgelotr]

Good first attempt, but for the future I would suggest cross-checking the translation with both the panels and tropes.

Two examples of where this would have been useful:

• "and will lose three inches" (p15): as shown in the panel, he means the "three fingers" she's biting off in the hypothetical situation.
• "the evil daughter" (p21): this is a direct translation of "akuyaku reijou" (lit. "noble daughter in the villain's role"), a trope figure that's usually translated as "villainess", but can also be acceptably translated as "evil noblewoman" (in fact, "akuyaku reijou" is the translation of "evil noblewoman" when they started using that role for otomeges, with the extra modifier of "daughter" since it was almost always a young noblewoman of marriageable age).

And in page 16 the girl used the word "talon", which makes no sense in context. I would say "slave", but I don't know how Indonesian works; most likely, there was a ruby there in the original where the author wrote "slave" read as "wife" (tsuma) and the first translator mistook "wife" with "talon, nail" (tsuma).

 

[vhjhvugyuyg8igyv]

I stop reading because the font is weird..
Also there’s a ’Rune’ sfx

 

[xAKLx]

This "revenge" is honestly disgusting especially when its revealed the mothers where neglectful shit parents themselves they knew there kids would be the hero party but taught them nothing about adventuring and how to survive despite them being S rank adventurers (the mothers)
like really how are you not going to teach your kids
As for the kids i feel bad for them they just turned 15 years old and immediately the goddess tells them they have to invade demon territory and slay the demon lord basically a death sentence since they where taught literally nothing since birth about how to do business manage diplomacy or even take care of themselves let alone how to fight
Its also pretty clear the mothers don't give a fuck about they're children and weather they live or die

this is kinda true. Tho not sure how bad this revenge is really, I mean, in the end, the kids need a good lesson, regardless of whether it was their parents' fault they ended up like that. In the end, the kids deserve some suffering from being pieces of shit to the mc, basic human dignity is something that should be required. The parents also should do some self-reflecting, and it was the mother who entrusted them to the MC (who didn't even receive money like the others) so it was their fault that the MC stayed with the kids for so long

 

[jessy17mei]

Normally I'm not one to care about snipes, but releasing a machine translated chapter a mere day after the current group released their most recent chapter feels a bit poor taste, especially since the previous group has been releasing pretty regularly.

who cares if the quality is decent?

 

[jessy17mei]

No, the other group released the previous chapter just yesterday.
This is just a case of someone jumping in to translate something someone else is working on for whatever reason.

Then release faster, the quality is decent so who tf cares.

 

[jessy17mei]

don't snipe

When I see how awful the translation, my mind just scream, "WHO TF TRANSLATE THIS CHAPTER?"

To even had an audacity to say, "...but I think It turned out quite well.", made me wonder, do you even read your own work to proofread it?

It just that awful. Sorry, it may sounds harsh, but before you try to translating a foreign language that didn't using any latin letter (like Arabic, Chinese, Japanese, etc.) using MTL, at least, you should understand the structure of the language. Or even better, just find some times to learn the language from zero so you have more understanding when translating it.

Also, another thing. If you want to snipe a series, go snipe a series scanlated by Galaxy Deken. Any series under their wing deserve to be sniped.

bro's mad someone made a decent translation faster ;(

 

[PureDisgust]

This is a pretty on the nose snipe, especially since the other group released yesterday.. The general rule is to wait 3 months before taking over a series.

Sorry, but I really don't see the logic in the concept of "on the nose sniping". It's weird that you people value honoring people who skirt the line of legality while ostracizing those who do the same but don't stand beholden to your "unwritten" rules.
There is no honor amongst thieves, scanlating as a whole isn't a morally justifiable thing to do.

 

[Senseal]

Decent translation but not but not a good idea to have words cut off mid line

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Hurts readability

 

[The_H_Guy]

Seriously guys... are you even bothering reading?
Ceres said multiple times that he have no hard feelings toward the husbands. And they always treathed him well. He has chosen wives/slaves that in case they fix their shitty and selfish attitude, they will be happy with them. Calling it a "revenge" is more a way to appease the women. That are actually those who feel wronged by them. But Ceres doesn't feel that way. He don't want them to suffer.

MC making a lot of assumptions lmao
This is the dumbest revenge

Cause he didn't want to revenge to begin with.

Like i said in previous post
The revenge kinda back fired because the husband never actually suffer any consequences and they really liked their new wives. All of them have something that their previous wives are missing and as far as I remember reading the WN. They are enjoying their new life.

As i said above.

 

[Rannnnn2]

as one of the dude who read the WN.. Its only gonna get much more 'better' for the heroes party.

 

[rafin016]

This "revenge" is honestly disgusting especially when its revealed the mothers where neglectful shit parents themselves they knew there kids would be the hero party but taught them nothing about adventuring and how to survive despite them being S rank adventurers (the mothers)
like really how are you not going to teach your kids
As for the kids i feel bad for them they just turned 15 years old and immediately the goddess tells them they have to invade demon territory and slay the demon lord basically a death sentence since they where taught literally nothing since birth about how to do business manage diplomacy or even take care of themselves let alone how to fight
Its also pretty clear the mothers don't give a fuck about they're children and weather they live or die

Bruh, you're thinking too much into this. This is just your avg "kicked from the hero party" lame comedy. We've seen this plenty of times, where MC used to do the odd jobs which NOBODY ELSE IN THE PARTY COULD DO. And as a result, they start struggling with SIMPLE stuffs when MC isn't there anymore . Surely, they can keep their room clean at least.

 

[PureDisgust]

Decent translation but not but not a good idea to have words cut off mid line

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Page 2:

金を酒やギャンブルに使い込んだ挙句
私を騙して奴隷商に売り飛ぱし金に換えたのに
どのツラ下げて帰ってきゃがったのかしら? (どの面下げて)
"After wasting all of our money on gambling and alcohol /
then selling me into slavery through your deception,
you dare return and show your face once again?"

"Ceres" isn't mentioned anywhere here, if he actually understood Japanese he'd 'd know どのツラ下げて is どの面下げて, which means, literally;
(exp) How could I (you, etc.) ...?; How dare you (they, etc.) (have the nerve to) ...?

I could go on, but I'm tired of reading this hackjob MTL.

 

[VooXoo]

The text is huge.