Ogami Tsumiki to Kinichijou. - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - Lunch With Tsumiki

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They had to explain because they did a terrible job of presenting what they meant to within the actual manga itself.

You make some good points but a fair amount of this just you assuming things and asking questions.

They had to explain because they did a terrible job of presenting what they meant to within the actual manga itself. Usually when a panel is in someone's imagination there are FX or something to give any hint whatsoever that this is the case, which the author did not do.

Like while many found it obvious that Yutaka was imagining that scene, others however did not. You're right in that the author could have made that page clearer for people which would have prevented some of the confusion and issues several had with this chapter.

Supposedly it's just about food right? Say that's the case, what living creature outside of symbiotic beings allows themselves to be fed on by a stranger casually like that? Oh, that's right, none of them.

That legit doesn't matter here. This just feels like you're applying real world logic to a fictional story, when fiction doesn't need to conform to reality.

And it's just about food and not sex right? So why does the vampire not feed on men too, and only females? Why mostly human females, when Genjin seem to (for some inexplicable reason) be so accepting of getting fed on? Even the one genjin he seems to approach is one of the most popular ones in the school, that has a fan club, and when he goes to her class to get her contact info (a play on the trope of the popular playboy hitting on the FMC), he doesn't try to get any of the other people in classes info? Why does he bother feeding on humans at all, when it just creates drama and Genjin are supposedly so accepting, if it's just about food?

You're also assuming Senga sucking blood is sexual, which is plausible because as you pointed out, he only seems to be interested in getting the contact info of girls and not guys. But nothing concretely points to his intentions being sexual, and that's just you assuming this is the case atm. No different than if I was to answer one of your questions by saying that he mainly goes after human girls rather than other genjin girls because they seem easier to manipulate (considering he had a flock of human girls behind him in chapter one, but Ogami never reacted to his flirtatious behavior in ch. 1 or 3). Reasonable, but nothing so far can confirm that, which makes it just an assumption.

You also questioned why he only goes for Ogami's contact info in her class, and gave your own reason for why that was the case anyway when you said it was playing on the pretty boy popular guy trope (which I agree it was). In which case, it's a trope which gets partially subverted because we find out in this chapter (when we learn a little more about Senga) that he doesn't actually have any romantic affection for the girls he calls up, and he even has their blood types listed by their contact info. Meaning he has all these people in his contacts, for the purpose of just feeding. At least, that is the way the chapter presented it. Whether it holds any more meaning than that to him remains to be seen.

Why does he feed on humans if it can create drama? Maybe he doesn't give a damn about the drama that could arise from that because he's a douche? Which would make sense given he didn't care how that one girl cried after she learned he only saw her as a food source, and proceeded to call up another to feed off of. Senga wanting to drink blood to eat, and Senga being a douche about it is not mutually exclusive. And it also doesn't go against the logic of the story since nothing presented up to this point makes his actions contradictory so far.

Like they have a cafeteria, and you could logically assume they have some food for a genjin like a vampire. But Senga is seen wanting to feed off of other individuals. We don't know if he needs to do that or not. We don't know why he does that, rather than go to the cafeteria. Hell, we don't even know if he does or doesn't go to the cafeteria. We literally don't know enough about how he thinks to claim this is some inconsistency in logic with the story.

Literally trash worldbuilding, all an excuse to put in his NTR fetish bait, that even if the imagination panel wasn't terribly executed and actually understood by the majority of his audience STILL doesn't make sense in terms of the logic of the world he's haphazardly creating.

What makes Yutaka imagining Ogami blushing to having her neck bitten not make sense or an inconsistency to the logic of the story so far?


Most of what you're saying can't be answered or dismissed without knowing more about the story (since most of what you posted were questions and assumptions). I do think you finding this part of the story poorly written worldbuilding is understandable. But with the little of the story we know atm (being that it's only been 3 chapters), the claim that it's inconsistent with the logic of the world just isn't true with what we know so far.
 
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Usually when a panel is in someone's imagination there are FX or something to give any hint whatsoever that this is the case, which the author did not do.
Am I just imagining the two-page long three-layered FX that's only transparent on the problematic panel, and even then changes the picture behind it?
Even if it's in his imagination, nothing about the scene makes sense. Supposedly it's just about food right? Say that's the case, what living creature outside of symbiotic beings allows themselves to be fed on by a stranger casually like that? Oh, that's right, none of them. And it's just about food and not sex right? So why does the vampire not feed on men too, and only females? Why mostly human females, when Genjin seem to (for some inexplicable reason) be so accepting of getting fed on? Even the one genjin he seems to approach is one of the most popular ones in the school, that has a fan club, and when he goes to her class to get her contact info (a play on the trope of the popular playboy hitting on the FMC), he doesn't try to get any of the other people in classes info? Why does he bother feeding on humans at all, when it just creates drama and Genjin are supposedly so accepting, if it's just about food?
"This one genjin that doesn't care too much about appearances is accepting of being fed on, so all genjin would be just as accepting, probably." Maybe if that were the case, there'd be a separate eating area for the genjin that eat insects, instead of just tables with space dividers. It's all just food, after all.

Feeding just on the human females is probably a convenience thing. He seems to have a lot of women's numbers even without asking for them himself, going by the crowd behind him as he asks for FMC's number. That would also explain why he didn't ask for contact info from anyone else in their class.

I would imagine vampires would have some metrics to measure people by to gauge how their blood might taste, which led him to approach FMC in the first place. Maybe smell, or maybe just "they look like they take good care of their body".

Even if it's just a food thing for the vampire, he does seem aware of the humans seeing it closer to a sex thing, with how he talks to the MC afterwards. Which might be why we haven't yet seen him feeding on men: because of the other persons perception, or the perceptions of others in general.
Author is going all in trying to do this big brain cultural differences complex worldbuilding, instead of just sticking to comfy slice of life romcom, and fell flat on their face because they weren't up to the task.
So...they didn't get all their worldbuilding done in the first three chapters, and that means that they aren't capable of handling complex worldbuilding? What a tough critic.
 
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People dropping this for that tiny, not-even-NTR NTR are babies. They aren't even a thing yet, broskis.
 
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The most lame thing author can give to us, is it really necessary to came out with with that panel? Fuck you
 
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Can't wait for what heinous NTR fetish content this shounen highschool slice of life romcom has in store 😱😱😱
Twenty chapters from now, an incubus will join the class. Naturally, as he feeds from sex, the feMC will have to oblige. Its only food, after all.
The MC, to make sure there is no love involved, will stand watch but unable to contain his feelings he will runaway midway.
 
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Twenty chapters from now, an incubus will join the class. Naturally, as he feeds from sex, the feMC will have to oblige. Its only food, after all.
The MC, to make sure there is no love involved, will stand watch but unable to contain his feelings he will runaway midway.
You jest, but I think the story is going to this way minus actual NTR.
I don't believe it will be a fluffy romance series, but how different humans and monsters are and how he has to accept the different cultures.
I'm not super interested in that and honestly they could of got the point of the chapter across without him fantasying about her blushing.
 
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You jest, but I think the story is going to this way minus actual NTR.
I don't believe it will be a fluffy romance series, but how different humans and monsters are and how he has to accept the different cultures.
I'm not super interested in that and honestly they could of got the point of the chapter across without him fantasying about her blushing.
"honestly they could of got the point of the chapter across without him fantasying about her blushing." - Agreed
That's the point
 
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They had to explain because they did a terrible job of presenting what they meant to within the actual manga itself. Usually when a panel is in someone's imagination there are FX or something to give any hint whatsoever that this is the case, which the author did not do.
So, you're butthurt cuz he didn't follow you're stupid preconceived notions of what does or doesn't make an imagination panel despite the fact it was apparent.
Even if it's in his imagination, nothing about the scene makes sense. Supposedly it's just about food right? Say that's the case, what living creature outside of symbiotic beings allows themselves to be fed on by a stranger casually like that? Oh, that's right, none of them.
You're wrong. You have an answer, it's genjin. They're capable of it as shown in this chapter.
And it's just about food and not sex right? So why does the vampire not feed on men too, and only females? Why mostly human females, when Genjin seem to (for some inexplicable reason) be so accepting of getting fed on? Even the one genjin he seems to approach is one of the most popular ones in the school, that has a fan club, and when he goes to her class to get her contact info (a play on the trope of the popular playboy hitting on the FMC), he doesn't try to get any of the other people in classes info? Why does he bother feeding on humans at all, when it just creates drama and Genjin are supposedly so accepting, if it's just about food?
Cuz he's a vampire. Their whole schtick is sucking human blood, like, we gonna pretend that werewolf wasn't howling at a picture of a full moon cuz that's what werewolves do.
Literally trash worldbuilding, all an excuse to put in his NTR fetish bait, that even if the imagination panel wasn't terribly executed and actually understood by the majority of his audience STILL doesn't make sense in terms of the logic of the world he's haphazardly creating.
Another idiot is using words he doesn't understand cuz anyone who has even a semblance of an idea of what NTR is should know that this doesn't apply.
Author is going all in trying to do this big brain cultural differences complex worldbuilding, instead of just sticking to comfy slice of life romcom, and fell flat on their face because they weren't up to the task.
3 chapters. That's all we have, 3 chapters, yet you touched starved cretins are all behaving like it's been 30. Man has barely done anything yet you lot have so heavily self-projected (in 3 chapters) that the slightest disruption of your"comfy slice of life" sends you all into a blood rage where you are wishing for bodily harm to befall that author.
 
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The author clearly wanted you to get mad, but they didn't expect to get backlash because they clearly don't understand the audience.
This is chapter was written like a shoujo manga for women.

You have a handsome vampire with groupies who is more popular and handsome then the MC.
He later bites her neck which is a very sensual part for both the West and even more for the East.
She is expressionless, but he imagines how a human would act(imaging getting cucked).
He realizes this isn't the case and apologies.
The author intends for you to get jealous and later react like the MC because monsters are different.

Here's the thing though you can still fucking hate the chapter for so many reasons.
Wad the fantasy necessary, why the neck, why did the vampire pick her, and many other things.
Hell it could even be that you are simply tired of fake drama baiting or NTR bait.

The author knew what they were doing the entire time. Vampires are the most sexual monster outside of a succubus.
I would say a succubus is actually less sexual as the just have sex or induce dreams while vampires are a massive walking allegory plus sex
 
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So, you're butthurt cuz he didn't follow you're stupid preconceived notions of what does or doesn't make an imagination panel despite the fact it was apparent.

You're wrong. You have an answer, it's genjin. They're capable of it as shown in this chapter.

Cuz he's a vampire. Their whole schtick is sucking human blood, like, we gonna pretend that werewolf wasn't howling at a picture of a full moon cuz that's what werewolves do.

Another idiot is using words he doesn't understand cuz anyone who has even a semblance of an idea of what NTR is should know that this doesn't apply.

3 chapters. That's all we have, 3 chapters, yet you touched starved cretins are all behaving like it's been 30. Man has barely done anything yet you lot have so heavily self-projected (in 3 chapters) that the slightest disruption of your"comfy slice of life" sends you all into a blood rage where you are wishing for bodily harm to befall that author.
"hat the slightest disruption of your"comfy slice of life" sends you all into a blood rage" - WHY even disrupt it? This is slice of life manga, not the NTR manga.
 

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